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Today, she made her own lunch.

Insisted on it. 

Determined.

She is three years old. 

Which simply means: 

She wants and knows and must. 

Everything. 

Always. 

She can do. 

One slice of potato bread

On a grown up plate

She leaned over the big jar

Dug deep and scooped

Strawberry jam

Dropping a spoonful on the bread

Working like an artist

Spread the sweetness

With a butter knife

Drawing into the corners

Meeting each edge

Concentrating

Next, the cream cheese

A second knife from the drawer

(Nana’s eyes widen – it is sharp!)

She scratched and fiddled

Lips pursed

Leaning into the gooey spread

Wanting it on her bread

One index finger helping

Holding the bread in place

Never giving up

Big sigh of success

Two hands fold

The bread together

Eyes twinkle 

Huge smile

She takes her first bite

Best. Sandwich. Ever.

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9 Comments

  1. Eva Kaplan Eva Kaplan

    I admire the determination of your granddaughter. It’s so fun to watch these determined little ones. I can imagine that it was the best sandwhich ever, because she created it!

    • I think that sandwich did taste awesome simply because she made it herself! She gobbled it up before I was able to send photos to her parents. So cute! I wish I could share her face in these photos – her expressions as she worked were absolutely priceless. Thank you, Eva!

  2. What a lovely post, Maureen. What a joy to see your granddaughter becoming independent. Her sandwich looks absolutely delicious. My own granddaughters do love cream cheese which reminded me of them while reading her sandwich creation. I loved your photos too!

    • Thank you, Barb! I had such fun watching her. She never had a single doubt that she could do this herself. Precious moment for me, to see her so determined.

  3. Maureen,
    Yikes! That knife! Success on the sandwich w/ no extra ingredients. This is such a milestone. My daughter-in-law sent a video of my grandson opening and closing doors. Proud of himself. He’s only 21 months and already doing big boy things. Time flies by so quickly. I’m so glad you included these photos. They are beautiful.

  4. Wow, Maureen, so sweet that your darling little Bird made her own sandwich. I’m impressed that you documented it without taking over and helping. She was brave and successful, and you celebrated her independence with her. Beautiful.

      • She was so proud of herself! Thank you, Denise! And I have no idea why my website is suddenly working better – I’m just going to enjoy the moment, lol.

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