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#SOL24-14 Wonder

It is Tuesday and time to write a 'Slice of Life." 
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If you and I were home, sipping tea, talking about favorite places to be, I’d assure you I love the mountains. I’d say, put me in the woods, let me hike and climb. The mountains are filled with such beauty and wonder. Yes, mountains are my most favorite place.  

But, hey, how can I deny the sea? I may not be a sunbather, but there really is no such thing as a bad day at the beach. It is glorious to walk alongside, and to be amazed. 

This old photo shows I have always loved being at the ocean, too. 

I’ve been writing a poem a day in 2024, and vacation doesn’t give me a pass. Today’s poem celebrates the wondrous sights of our beach vacation.

Hilton Head Island 

Low Tide mingles with New Moon 
Rippling waves begin to dance
Alligators sun at the lagoon
Osprey hides on a branch

Slender Fish jumps high with glee
Driftwood floats slowly along
Great Heron glides just beneath
Yellow Warbler creates a song

Shorebirds gather on found wood
Dolphins play hide and seek 
How still Snowy Egret stood
As we laze upon the beach
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7 Comments

  1. Maureen,
    That photo of you as a young girl is lovely. Your poem transports us to your beach day. I continued writing poems during our Hawaii trip. You’re right: We don’t get a break from the challenge. I write my blog posts and poems a day ahead, and I was up until midnight working on today’s poem. The blog ate my evening!

  2. Alligators! I have never seen one not caged in. This poem is beautiful and reads well, and makes me feel I am there with you! It’s almost a list of all the things you saw on this beach trip, and the last line sums it up so well.

    • Denise, there are many, many alligators here. We give them wide berth! There have been some tragic incidents through the years – rare, very rare. It is quite surprising to be pedaling one’s beach bike and happen upon one.

  3. Maureen, I adore your photographs. We’re on the same page today as far as posts. I love your use of catalog in your poem today. Your ending was my favorite part because it sounds so relaxing, and I personally adore the word laze. Enjoy your vacation!

  4. Kim Johnson Kim Johnson

    Maureen, there is such visual imagery and sensory feeling here in your lines, and I love the rhyme scheme. I love the photo of you as a child there at the beach, and now there with your family. What a lovely post to capture all the beauty of the memories that you are making!

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