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Georgia On My Mind

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We’ve been in Georgia for the past week, for the annual reunion of my husband’s family. He is one of 13 children, with only four still living, and this leads to quite the crowd. There are spouses, children, grandchildren, and even a few great grandchildren for the oldest siblings. The reunion was on Saturday, but we made a week of it, visiting with different family members and friends for longer meet ups. It is a wonderful tradition to start our summer.

Driving back today, I looked through photos and reflected on conversations…it led to a bit of a poem. I need to work on this still, but here’s my slice of life…

Georgia On My Mind

the June reunion takes us back
over many miles and memories

a steady rain as we drive
seems to echo the mind’s machinations
whispering yet insisting,
saturating

all the cooking from the heart
butter peas, crowder peas, green beans
cornbread, mac-n-cheese
okra and dressing
(made just like Mimi always did)
pies, pound cake, chocolate delight
so many family favorites 
be sure to have a bite of everything

thirty-five years of showing up
has worn down 
the suspicion of me, 
the one raised ‘east coast, Catholic,’
yet it lingers askance
like framing on old weathered barns 

maybe I’m one of those little stone houses
staying put
strong and steady 

in their midst yet on the periphery
I love it here

dear ones open up to me
sharing confidences
the buttered biscuit on the side
taking all the juices in

now I’m remembering all the kudzu 
creating funny monsters against the Georgian blue
or is it simply keeping secrets
saying, no, not now, no light on this
keep quiet about that

let me think on this
maybe I’ll share more later

simply remember
the chortle of the littles
as they ran and laughed
together

family is precious
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4 Comments

  1. Maureen,
    Your poem echoes some of my thoughts about family: living in the fringe at reunions, still suspicions. I’m always conflicted about these get-togethers. I don’t fit in well w/ much of my family. Glad you had fun and got in some good longer visits.

  2. Kim Johnson Kim Johnson

    Maureen, I’m so glad you shared this slice! It brings us to the real, as we say in Georgia, sure ‘nuff stuff of life – family, food, conversation. The buttered biscuit soaking it all in is such a metaphor for a southern family reunion! I love this – and the photos to help reflect is something that I do, too, lest I forget a detail! Safe travels!

  3. Diane Anderson (newtreemom) Diane Anderson (newtreemom)

    Your story brings to mind family reunions of my mom’s 10 siblings and the whole county of my husband’s relatives in Georgia. I was the “Yankee” in my husband’s Southern family. Ahh, the Southern cuisine and secrets.. and always little ones running around.

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