Often, I only discover what I’m feeling when what I write tells it back to me. - Pádraig Ó Tuama ( Poetry Unbound newsletter)
I had a mini experience of this, just now.
It’s after 7pm here on the east coast and I am struggling to write a Tuesday slice for this week. I opened up my journal and re-read my early morning writing, in hopes of discovering something I might share. I feel bereft of ideas and short on time. Today, and the past several days, have been like one long run-on sentence, fun and full and in need of a good editor.
I found this little nugget from my morning journaling:
orchid blossoms fade wispy worn angels falling resting on the sill
You see, I had watered the houseplants, and, in so doing, I had the gift of watching a spent blossom quietly fall, this lovely slip, slide of a dance. Such a sweet little moment deserves a haiku, yes?
In the busyness of today, I had long since forgotten this surprisingly slow, languid moment. Surely, this is one of the greatest joys of my morning writing, however aimless it may feel at the time – to discover the forgotten.
I think I will let this be my slice for this week – simply so.
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Maureen,
I think you made a superb choice. The small moments are the best, the most important. I think of the winter as its own metaphor of bereftness and writer’s block.
Thanks, Glenda! I’m not sure I’m having writer’s block as much as I’m having time block – so many to do’s…
I will always vote for a haiku slice! What is it about the haiku that makes it so perfect? Yours is beautiful.
Those 17 syllables feel so achievable – I enjoy starting my day with one. Thanks for commenting!
Mmm… a well-captured moment – “wispy worn angels” is really evocative. I like, too, how the quiet moment was eclipsed by the busy day, at least until you discovered it again. Makes for a really thought-provoking slice.
Yes, this moment was eclipsed by the day – I wonder how I might hold these quiet moments a little longer, throughout the day? I appreciate your comments, Amanda.
Good choice! I love the simplicity of haiku. And orchids. The second line is my favorite, a perfect description of how the blooms fall.
I actually saved a couple of these blossoms for a day or two, because they really looked to be little angels. Thank you for commenting!
Good Evening, Ms. Maureen:
Simply beautiful indeed. I am forever fascinated by the pliability of well written words. You used so few to convey such depth of emotion, esteem and awe. Your lyrical haiku is laden with admiration, and its imagery rich description made me hold my breath as I endeavored to imagine what you so eloquently depicted.
Your haiku is ethereal. Thank you so much for sharing. You offer a poignant reminder that haikus can be as hearty as they are delicate. Masterfully done!
What a blessing of a comment! Thank you so much! I love your thinking here, that ” haikus can be as hearty as they are delicate.” That is beautiful. Thanks for commenting!