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Musing

It is Tuesday and time to write a 'Slice of Life." 
Thank you Two Writing Teachers for creating this supportive community
of teacher-writers!

Someone is singing an opera in my backyard as I write; they’ve been at it all morning. My Merlin app tells me they are a Northern Flicker, a visually beautiful dear soul with dotted plumage, yet I cannot catch even one tiny glance. They prefer to sing from deep within the leafing branches of the maple tree, and perhaps their song is one of lament because I am not able to see them. Yes, I put myself at the center of their song.

I don’t know what to tell you.

Hmm.

Does anyone else have trouble starting a ‘Slice of Life,’ now that the March challenge is over and the writing is not daily? 

Which personal thread to grab onto and run-write with it? 

I simply don’t know.

I could tell you about my relaxing weekend in the woods, on retreat with my book group. I could write about our conversation about Ann Patchett’s Tom Lake. Oh, and how a few of us watched the 1940 film classic of Our Town, as a little ‘background’ for the book. 

(Should I tell you how surprising it was that this movie deigned to create a new ‘happy’ ending for Thornton Wilder’s play?)

I could focus on just one hike, share with you the sweet spring growth I observed. Here are a couple photos of this emergence:

Oh, but I’ve shared about countless hikes in this space.

How about I tell you about the book I’m reading – Terrance Hayes’ Watch Your Language? I am absolutely awed by his witty and playful writing, how he draws clever doodles throughout the book, and simultaneously offers so much scholarly wisdom on Black poets and the history of modern poetry in general. He is piercing many myths I have swallowed whole. With every page, my understanding and curiosity about poetry expands.

I don’t know where to begin.

Consider this excerpt about Gwendolyn Brooks, as he considers the historical timeline of ‘modern great poets’ –

Brooks makes any conversation about American poetry of the last half century more interesting. Brooks was born in 1917, the same year as Robert Lowell, who won the Pulitzer in 1947, three years before Brooks. When he passed in 1977 Lowell was considered one of the chief poets of the twentieth century. He taught both Anne Sexton and Sylvia Plath. His family history could be traced back to the Mayflower.

As Robert Lowell is to Anne Sexton and Sylvia Plath, Brooks is to several generations of poets. Brooks met with James Baldwin and many Black poets of the era in her living room. I wish there was a better record of her relationship with Sonia Sanchez, their chats about motherhood, poetry, Blackness, community. Sonia Sanchez published her debut, Homecoming, in 1969, the same year Lucille Clifton published her debut, Good Times. Audre Lorde published The First Cities, her debut, in 1968. Brooks was a central figure in the work of all three poets.

Terrance Hayes, Watch Your Language, pp 24-25
He notes, 
“She often goes unacknowledged the way caretakers and angels go unacknowledged.”

Terrance Hayes’ writing sends me tumbling, makes me pause, reflect, and re-read. He makes me wonder about all the details that were left out of my schooling. I chase down my Gwendolyn Brooks poetry book and lose myself within.

There is so much I was never taught.
There is so much that was so dull about the way I was taught.
There is so much more to learn.

Why was I never challenged to question?

I don’t know what to tell you.

Let me close with a poem I wrote yesterday for Ethical ELA, where Angie Braaten prompted us to write an elegy, with inspiration from Clint Smith's poem “Playground Elegy.” Honestly, I think all of my above rambles fed into this poem:
Textbook Elegy

The first time       I penned                  my name and date
in that       rectangle stamp       of the history textbook 
reading the     names of students     from years before 
I turned   quickly   to      chapter one,              devouring. 
Each   line      of text     so pure and real and insightful.
I studied every page and absorbed  great knowledge.
I looked forward      to the next year’s               textbook
revealing    so much                 more                 of the world.
It would be  years   before I noticed its     white space. 
I knew sanitized only from the bathroom.          I knew
sifted from cakes,                      left out from friendships,
omitted from   don’t say that      around mom and dad. 
I didn’t know                 what                              I didn’t know. 
I read with joy,                     absorbing believing trusting.
Now I wonder who   powers  every single line of text
and do students wonder about this and does anyone
know         what is not written.  
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SOLSC #28 – On Writing

It is Tuesday and time to write a 'Slice of Life." 
Thank you Two Writing Teachers for creating this supportive community
of teacher-writers!

My favorite place to write is here in my nook in our family room, looking out into our backyard. This is my writing chair:

For years, this writing chair was in my bedroom – which was a lovely place to write, too – a quiet corner of the house. When we remodeled this past year, this ‘bay’ in our family room sat vacant for a moment or two; I didn’t know what to do with the space. Then I heard it cry out to me: grab your journal and pen, and settle in, feel the sun at your shoulder! It is a wonderful location – I sit with my feet up on the ottoman, my quilt across my lap, and with bounteous light coming in through the windows. I could never have written here when the boys were young, right here in the center of the whole house. It would have been so noisy, one interruption after another. Now, however, it is just Tony and I here at home, and the family room is much more quiet. He’s often squirreled away in his den and I am here. This is where I sit and write each morning, readying for the day. 

I think ‘quiet’ is perhaps the number one ingredient for most of my writing – this need to be apart, to think.  

If I find myself stuck with my writing, I get up and do something else for a while. Here’s where I head if I am trying to ‘unlock’ some thoughts – my play area in my basement:

This is a fun space that I share with my granddaughters when they come by to visit. I have lots of craft materials – varied markers, scissors, paint, glue, stamps, and collage papers. I draw and I paint and I tinker here. I have a couple different projects in the works. It is great to have a space that I can just leave things be, and return to when the time is right.

One writing project I am in the midst of right now is to finish a children’s story. This is a self-propelled idea; I have been toying with this story for a couple of years now. When I say ‘finish,’ I mean: write the story from beginning to end. This story is really a poem, one that I have stopped and started several times now. I change my rhyming pattern, come up with a different way to start the story, lose the rhymes entirely, over and over, I am spinning in place. Each of these false starts keeps me from writing the story completely, from beginning to end. 

My basement play area is helping me get through this impasse. Working here, I laid out the story on index cards from beginning to end, sketching – doodling, really – the action. Now I am working on larger art paper for each card, creating collage images and writing words alongside. I am channeling my inner Oge Mora or Eric Carle.

When the words are flowing, I take out my computer and write. When I ‘jam up’ again, I work more intensely on the visual art that is needed next. Back and forth, illustrations to writing to more illustrations to still more writing. I still haven’t written a complete draft – but I am so much closer, thanks to this art ‘tinkering’ on the side. 

Writing is fun!

Where do you write and what are you working on?