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Night Sounds

The afternoon sun on the Cacopan River in West Virginia

I found myself wide-awake both nights of the retreat, this past weekend. I lucked into the bottom bunk due to my timely arrival, but it did little to assist my being comfortable in the narrow unfamiliar cot. I was alone awake, in a bunkhouse with other women, listening to the sounds of the darkness from within and outside. 

I was fascinated by everyone’s breathing noise. Spellbound. Listening. Yes, we are women of a certain age, and we are no longer delicate in our sleep. A shift in our sleeping positions and here comes the whinnying, gasps, and snorts. My husband has nudged me many times for my snores, poking me when I am sound asleep, encouraging me to move from my back to my side or my belly, so that he might return to quiet. As I lay awake in the bunkhouse, I delighted in the variety of these sounds, and the ‘call and response’ nature – it was as if women called out to each other under the veil of night, offering a secret conversation. 

bunkhouse reverie

conversations continue
in the dark of night
snorts and snarls
chokes and spurts
gasps and growls
intermittent coughs
an airplane landing?
a leaf blower cranked?
unknown beast?
she settles and all goes quiet,
then she answers from across the room
stops and starts 
call and response
symphony of seniors

As I settled into this uncertain concert, I let go of the sounds within the cabin and honed in on the night noise outside, in the wood surrounds. I became transfixed by this unknown warble, an unfamiliar animal trill – was this a bird or a four-legged friend? It sounded musical, like a gentle shake of a maraca, a call emitted from deep in the being’s throat. The sound varied in length, as if conversational phrases – varying from 3-4 seconds to nearly 20 seconds at one point. Who’s out in the woods in West Virginia in the middle of the night? 

Over breakfast, I tried to describe what I heard, but no one seemed to know what animal it might be. There was no way to solve this mystery during my retreat, because we were very much ‘off the grid.’ As soon as I returned home, I began to investigate online, looking up what animals live in this region and what sounds they make. Isn’t the internet the most fabulous tool? I’m excited to say, I did find the source of the beautiful sound: the eastern screech owl. (I really like this YouTube link because you can watch the owl as they make the sound.)

“Observe and reflect, become a little wiser every day.”
- so sayeth an unknown owl
It’s Tuesday and I’m participating in the Slice of Life.
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10 Comments

  1. Maureen, this slice is GORGEOUS. The combination of prose and poetry brings this “senior symphony” to life. Love that you tracked down the source of the mystery sound!

    • Thank you, Amy! I am frequently awake in the middle of the night these days, so it is fun to just go with the flow and listen more intently, see what writing emerges.

  2. Kim Johnson Kim Johnson

    Maureen, what a way to recharge – – a retreat with others who share your passions AND the remote setting, with sounds of the night. Ahhhhh……

    • It was a delightful getaway! You were having fun, too, I think – at NCTE with others from EthicalELA? What a great gathering you had! Thanks for commenting.

  3. Maureen, oh my goodness! I love this so much, and I can totally relate. I am part of the “symphony of seniors” now. Beautiful post of this sweet slice of life. You show yourself to be the live-life-to-the-fullest person I know you are.

  4. Maureen,
    I’m about to nod off as I catch up on reading blogs, not because they aren’t captivating but because I’m so very tired. Still, I’m awed by the pleasure you’ve found in your companions’ night sounds, and i laughed at “ symphony of seniors.” Thst does not sound at all pleasant to me!

    • Lol, it’s a type of ‘surrender,’ Glenda! I decided to just go with it, to enjoy the sounds, to see if there was any poetry – and there definitely was. It’s fascinating, really, how we age, lol. I hope you are having a nice getaway. Always great to hear from you!

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